Harley Merlin and the Secret Coven (Harley Merlin #1) by Bella Forrest

Harley Merlin and the Secret Coven (Harley Merlin #1)

When a rogue 19-year-old witch is recruited to help guard an ancient magical Bestiary, a breath-stealing journey begins... Being an empath has its advantages. Harley Merlin can sense people’s emotions, among other things. It’s how she snagged her first job pinpointing cheaters at a casino.But she has no clue where she got these freakish powers because she spent her childhood jumping from home to home in the foster system, and her father lef...


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TitleHarley Merlin and the Secret Coven (Harley Merlin #1)
Author
Release DateAug 27th, 2018
PublisherNightlight Press
GenreFantasy, Young Adult, Fiction, Paranormal, Magic, Urban Fantasy
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Reviews Harley Merlin and the Secret Coven (Harley Merlin #1)

  • Mike
    2018-09-06
    Started out well, and I thought it was going to be both well-edited and fairly original. Sadly, in the end it was neither. Enjoyable enough, but not quite worthy of four stars (I did originally err on the side of generosity, but decided on reflection to give it three). Firstly, it's based much too closely on Harry Potter, up to and including points for an end-of-year prize and childish bickering (if anything, the HP kids are more mature than thes...
  • Piya
    2018-12-26
    What I liked:Wade - one of the main characters, I could connect with him as a person easily enough and liked him. Storyline and Plot - I liked the overall arc, despite the slight "chosen one" feeling it gave. Pace - Perfect.What I didn't like:The Writing Style - After about 50% into the book it stopped bothering me because the plot was engaging but it seriously bothered me until then. It's clumsy and lazy. Sometimes the writer would preempt somet...
  • ☘Misericordia☘ ~ The Serendipity Aegis ~ ⚡ϟ⚡ϟ⚡⛈ ✺❂❤❣
    2019-05-06
    A fun read and a good start of a promising story. I do have my gripe with this one but they are more than balanced out by the good points. All the 'going forward' happening - everything does it, even the dreamcatcher. I didn't notice them going backward or sideways a lot, did we need to specifically note that they were going forward a lot?It's a good thing I'm an HP fan and am not irritated by parallels happening. Actually, some stuff is an impro...
  • Emilia
    2019-02-01
    That's a couple of hours I'm never getting back. Started out nicely but went downhill faster than a rollercoaster ride. DNF and won't bother. "The next Harry Potter" my arse. Thank u, next.
  • Jeanny
    2019-04-30
    A disappointment. 🤨 the 📖 begins well enough but as it progressed it suffered from slow pacing & uninteresting characters. 1 Subpar Star DNF 25%
  • Kaitlin Underwood
    2018-11-19
    An interesting new world of witchcraft and wizardry! This book has a bit of a nostalgic feel for the fans of Harry Potter, in that there are secret institutions of magical people hidden in enchanted pockets of the world. It is much more mature and dark than any children's books, though.One thing Bella Forrest is the Queen, Grand Master, and Ultimate Ruler of is creating a full cast of characters who band together and exhibit the true definition o...
  • Melissa Dinwiddie
    2018-09-25
    An older, female Harry PotterSeveral other reviewers, as well as the book’s description, have compared Harley Merlin to Harry Potter, and the comparisons are apt—a magical society/school that humans are unaware of; bureaucratic elements; forces of evil; an orphaned main character with an opaque family history. But Bella Forrest has created her own magical world, filled with delightful characters and rules that I found great fun to explore. I ...
  • Melody
    2019-01-06
    Harley Merlin and the Secret Coven. Where do I start? I picked it up in the first place because I heard it compares favorably to Harry Potter. It is an entertaining story and it does indeed remind me of Harry Potter. And Harley is 19 when we meet her, which is nice in that it makes me feel less like I’m reading a children’s book.I’m not sold on it, though. The biggest issue for me is that the book reads not like an inspired fan’s attempt ...
  • Misha
    2018-10-29
    Just no...This book seemed like it was going to be awesome and the high ratings made me believe I had picked a winner. I was wrong. I didn’t like it, but I’m not sure if it’s because of my idiosyncrasies,rather than the author’s writing style, the plot or the characters that tanked this for me. Let me explain. The book moves really slow (at least to me). More so in the first part of the book. I expected more action, less talk. I’m not s...
  • Julia
    2018-12-12
    I read this book as it had been compared to Harry Potter in reviews. I grew up with Harry Potter and those books have shaped my childhood. While the Harley Merlin series was an enjoyable, quick read, it has nothing on Harry Potter. I found that the author focused on the outer appearance and as with almost all teen novels nowadays they could all be found on runways in real life and the main character has two gorgeous guys vying for her attention. ...
  • Jinjre
    2019-02-16
    I am, by all measures, an adult. I also happen to like YA fiction.This book is not Harry Potter. It is not even close to Harry Potter. The language and vocabulary sounds like a frustrated 8th grader wrote it. It has a trope on every page. Most 30 year olds do not have "Did not!-Did too!" arguments. To have this occur in the world the author has created is jarring at best and laughable at worst.Stick to the in-flight magazine, and don't bother wit...
  • Abi
    2019-01-09
    This was a pretty good book. It had interesting magic and culture. The pacing was good. The plot had a twisty, surprising mystery. The characters were intriguing and the main character was easy to like. I was never bored, and liked it from the beginning. The start of the romance is promising. Overall, a good start to a series that is, to my knowledge, complete this month. I will read book 2. 4.5 stars.
  • Chloe Adams
    2019-05-15
    I don't normally read stuff like this but I've been hooked all day! Brilliant read can nit want to read the next!!
  • Natalia Navarro
    2018-09-02
    Wow!!! 🤓This a fantastic start of the series!!!... Just by reading Harley's last name I knew it has to be a great book!!!... The plot is amazing, with the last of the Merlin descendant as the main character; who has to find out her place in the world, when she discovers she's not the only one with special abilities... Will she stay in the coven after all that happen in her first week there?, including the discovery of her true heritage?... I c...
  • Nicole Ouimet
    2019-01-09
    CaptivatingI am an enormous Harry Potter fan, and while nothing will ever come close to HP, this book was captivating. I read it in just 2 days!! Can’t wait to read the next one, and I am also very excited to see that Bella Forrest has a ton of other series out there for me to enjoy. I am a huge fun of the supernatural, and it looks like I found the right author for me.
  • Mo
    2019-02-13
    Book 1 in this seriesIt took me a while to get through the reading of this book, but the ending more than made up for the boredom in between. Finch will be back. Wade is caring. The Rag team are amazing! On to Book 2 to see where Harley goes next, happy reading!
  • Danielle Schiestle
    2019-03-10
    Loved this book and can't wait to read the rest of the series! Giving it 5 stars due to how engaging it was and how quickly I flew through the book - the characters are quirky and have more depth to them than you realize when you first meet them. However, the writing style I'd put more at 3 stars. It's very informal and definitely a YA book. At times the writing is a little immature. I initially started this book because it's been marketed as a s...
  • Rochelle
    2018-09-23
    I loved this book and can’t wait for the second one! It definitely has some Harry Potter similarities (house points, and other obvious things if you’re a Harry Potter fan). I love Harry Potter though so that means I loved this book! Harley is a strong character and can’t wait for her powers to become stronger. I didn’t see it coming that Finch would be her half brother! Such a huge twist! Also, can her and Wade just kiss already?! The sus...
  • Marcia Haskell
    2018-12-09
    I saw an ad that said this book was the next Harry Potter and laughter, to myself “oh sure, I don’t believe it”. This has the same characteristics I enjoyed in the Harry Potter series, a fun, quirky main character, interesting, not-quite-believable situations and an enemy who is hidden. I enjoyed every minute of this book and will certainly get the next books in the series. I am looking forward to seeing what Hailey learns and how she learn...
  • Lburt
    2018-10-16
    Meh, this book was written well with developed characters and a good plot. My “meh” review is because I couldn’t decided what age level it was designed for. Some parents are YA and some children’s. It was a bit confusing and a little hard for me to get into. The point system really threw me, like who cares if the coven doesn’t get points this is real life not children at hog warts. People are getting killed and injured, just do the righ...
  • Teresa
    2018-11-05
    In this book there is a world of magicals and gargoyles and superb characters; a smart mouth smart thinking heroine called Harley, her Rag tag team lead by a handsome fella called Wade and a lot of supernatural action.This was as good as I'd hoped it would be, and I look forward to reading the next.
  • Sandy
    2019-03-31
    A really good YA read.I will definitely recommend Harley to my kids at school. I can tell the author is a Harry Potter fan - a few similarities to Hogwarts for sure - which makes the story more endearing and let's the reader connect with a new kind of magical world. On to the 2nd book!
  • Hilary Broadway
    2019-01-03
    This is a fun young adult read. The pace is quick. The writing is a bit fair - I've never seen the word "chuckled" used so frequently, but the ride is fun enough that I went on to read book two and am reading book 3 now. It's a fast read, perfect for Percy Jackson fans.
  • Monica Alvarado
    2019-04-03
    Great read I really enjoyed reading Harley Merlin and the Secret Coven by Bella Forrest. I can not wait to read the whole series.
  • Deanna
    2019-02-09
    Some spoiler alerts!!! This reminds me of the first time I read "Twilight." I kept thinking -- I love these characters, I love the themes, I love the world-building -- I just wish Stephenie Meyer was a better writer. She improved much over the course of the Twilight series. This author struggles a bit to maintain steady characterizations, and when characters change their reactions and emotions as a plot device, it's annoying. The other problem is...
  • Lori McCord McAlister
    2018-12-23
    Solid 4 star read with potential to make a fun tv series.LIKES: Harley's banter was reminiscent of Buffy Summers, which I liked. Tough and gentle with side of snarky. A wide variety of characters with versatile magical styles and abilities. Fast paced novel. Action/battle scenes well written and easy to visualize. Lots of good vs evil, elite vs misfit, and a hint of romance. DISLIKES: Most of my dislikes are nitpicking. Overuse of the word 'rauco...
  • Bekah
    2019-01-12
    I really enjoyed this book. I loved that it wasn't your typical witch story. It was full of interesting things but didn't feel like a heavy read and I really needed that. Can't wait to read the next one.
  • Michelle Esterhuyzen
    2019-02-05
    So much worth it. I would love to see a tv series or a movie of this I loved it